ecto’s Reviews > Nineteen Claws and a Black Bird > Status Update

i just dont get it yet. the writing style of the first story is almost insufferable. theres SO many commas, like it literally reads the way i type texts as an adhd person. one sentence took up half my kindle screen and still had one or two lines on the page right before it. not every story is written like that but theres no clear reason why. some of its just off, idk how else to explain it