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The, very, odd and excessive, use, of, commas and sometimes lack of commas made pages, 1-5 fairly, unreadable. I note that future, pages (randomly, selected), seem to, have moderated comma use but, sentences still, run, to half a page. On, that basis I, shall continue the book, but on, another day....
Apr 24, 2024 03:23PM
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