Momoon ⁠☆’s Reviews > Powerless > Status Update

So far it's like reading a poorly written AO3 fanfiction. Sure it's good, but nothing very new for the plot so far, the ML is cringe. The fanfiction feeling I get as I read this is mainly bc of how the POVs are written. No need to say the characters are sweaty and changed, like who gives a f ?? Focus on feelings more than irrelevant filler sentences to make chapters longer