Hurricane_ReD’s Reviews > Diary of Thorns > Status Update

Numerous words on page 138 running together where there should be spaces in between. Normally I'd ignore this in reviewing an ARC, but this book has already been published, and the author, who claims to have done her own editing, should've read this book aloud to herself before hitting the 'Publish' button.

This page has 'aa' instead of 'a' in one spot.

This story is very odd. The writing is clunky in some places, and incredibly smooth in others, almost like it was written by two different people working together. Very disjointed and stiff. I feel like I need to finish it at this point, but I'm not particularly excited about it.

There are definitely some spacing issues here. Some words run together when they shouldn't, and some are too far apart.

The first 4 pages of this were painful to read. Having gotten to page 9, now it feels like those first 4 pages were part of a different book.