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AF
is 75% done
Some grammar issues ("a extra long run"?) and other nuisances such as when Clint opens the web browser on his phone, but then pulls out his phone to place a call (isn't his phone already out?) Plot however, is enough to hold my interest and overlook these blunders. Definitely needs a new editor.
— Dec 30, 2015 07:27AM
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