Danielle (Danniegurl)’s Reviews > Her Stepbrothers are Dragons > Status Update

Ok so they didn't know where they landed but suddenly know where a cave is? And suddenly "brought" things to make the cave more homey? How? Did they go shopping? Weren't they in the middle of no where? And if they could shop why huddle up in a cave?

Too many "tills" in place of until. It's becoming annoying sorta like saying "like" all the time. Also by chapter 3 they are explaining what they are and who she is to them. Very early in the book.