Kelly’s Reviews > How to End a Love Story > Status Update
Kelly
is 17% done
I don’t think I like this…I really don’t like the writing style. The 3rd tense is very awkward. And the FMC is unreasonably mean to the MMC! I understand her sister died but maybe show some freaking compassion to the person who has to deal with the trauma of accidentally running her over because she decided to jump in front of their car. I’d like to think I’d show some level of empathy in that situation.
— May 01, 2024 08:18AM
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