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Ellie
is 12% done
I have no words. The author is either deliberately setting up opportunities for C&M to be captured or is just not thinking things through. C&M are now fugitives in all the land. Yet they allow M to send a letter to H&S using her full name and indicating that she’s at Busk?? N the page after the council meeting where C&M’s presence is to be kept secret, they bring M to town for drinks?? What logic is this??
— May 01, 2024 09:44AM
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Ellie
is 36% done
There’s a lot of repetition in this book. Maybe that’s why it took 4 books to complete. Why the need to explain what White Sickness is again? Wasn’t it covered in Book 1 already?
— May 01, 2024 12:21PM
Ellie
is 36% done
Again, not really keeping themselves secret. I’m not surprised they are being ambushed everywhere because they make such little effort to conceal their presence!
The writing is starting to get a bit flat for me. There seems to be a lot of talk of what to do next, pretty descriptions of things, a lot of travelling, not much plot progress.
— May 01, 2024 12:19PM
The writing is starting to get a bit flat for me. There seems to be a lot of talk of what to do next, pretty descriptions of things, a lot of travelling, not much plot progress.
