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It’s written in a weird way where occasionally things will be written in a way that makes it look like the editor dozed off and skipped bits. I also found a spelling mistake “here” which should’ve been “her”.. it’s things like this that haven’t helped with my cohesion at times..
Story is okay though so far.
— May 01, 2024 02:07PM
Story is okay though so far.
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Elliott
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From the “Reading random books I find to my newborn daughter to settle her” series.
Nice overall start to this story although it all feels very strangely written and can feel a bit convoluted at times.
— Apr 30, 2024 01:58PM
Nice overall start to this story although it all feels very strangely written and can feel a bit convoluted at times.
