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Started the reading sample.
Bit on edge about the framing device of 'Oh yeah, this stuff totally happened to my great-grandmother, here are her adventures, also my gran who recently passed away was also super-special' that feels like... Why?
There's no reason for such framing device, it adds nothing (yet), and to me felt more like filler and... it doesn't feel right.
— May 05, 2024 01:40PM
Bit on edge about the framing device of 'Oh yeah, this stuff totally happened to my great-grandmother, here are her adventures, also my gran who recently passed away was also super-special' that feels like... Why?
There's no reason for such framing device, it adds nothing (yet), and to me felt more like filler and... it doesn't feel right.
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