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Deljah
is 45% done
omg, the h is now forcing her way into battle after the H locked her in a room to keep her away. But, "she can help" lol. Mary Sue, is that you?
— Jan 04, 2016 04:27AM
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Deljah
is 35% done
finding this very clichéd so far. The conversations aren't flowing well. The h isn't asking the questionsame that a reasonable person would ask in her situation. It feels manipulated to move the plot along and terribly implausible.
— Jan 04, 2016 03:43AM