Vampire Eater’s Reviews > Deception > Status Update
Vampire Eater
is on page 21 of 475
The pacing is truly odd. Alexis flutters to different events of the day at a breakneck pace. Not much time is spent dwelling on the feelings and when feelings are brought up it’s told rather than shown. Some of the dialogue is really good when other times it’s incredibly clunky and awkward. The premise of this book is interesting but it doesn’t flow naturally.
— May 08, 2024 08:51PM
Like flag
Vampire’s Previous Updates
Vampire Eater
is on page 162 of 475
The writing in this book is driving me crazy.
— May 13, 2024 04:52AM
Vampire Eater
is on page 136 of 475
“The taste in my mouth was unlike anything I have ever tasted.”
The sentence I just read was unlike anything I’ve read….🙃
— May 12, 2024 09:30AM
The sentence I just read was unlike anything I’ve read….🙃
Vampire Eater
is on page 111 of 475
“… I have always been freakishly smart…” Alright, calm down miss CSI
— May 12, 2024 07:35AM
Vampire Eater
is on page 82 of 475
There’s potential here with many instances of this book. Just little glimmers of something compelling but then it’s smothered out by dull uninspired dialog and the “And then” writing format. So far this book is a decent idea with no flair or enticing execution.
— May 11, 2024 02:09AM
Vampire Eater
is on page 21 of 475
Isn’t Alexis a book nerd? Why is she saying things like “…use my science knowledge to uncover evidence at a crime scene.” Rather than just say forensics investigator… the author also has her say “… got to go on a walk through with some real CSI’s…” that’s odd and doesn’t sound natural abbreviated in this context. The writing is presented more juvenile than YA.
— May 08, 2024 08:57PM
