Zaz’s Reviews > Switch! The Lost Kingdoms of Karibu > Status Update
Zaz
is 16% done
Argh, not smooth chapters. Teenagers are normal people, they deserve to not be awkward when I read them! Otherwise, the African atmosphere is really well done, I almost could see the crocodiles, the mosquitos and the creepy parasites in the pool (thanks to the overthinking boy).
— Jan 08, 2016 04:50PM
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Zaz
is 98% done
"the girl with the surprised hair". Happens often with hair :p
— Jan 15, 2016 04:08AM
Zaz
is 64% done
"He placed Joe's right hand on a wooden block. 'No, my bowling hand!' he thought in panic". Yeah, right. I'm pretty sure when people burnt witches, the 1st thing the women thought was something like "oh no, they'll ruin my pretty dress". Whatever.
— Jan 14, 2016 08:26AM
Zaz
is 35% done
"The brindle pelt of her tunic was an exact match with the hair on her head". Thanks for the precision, I'd probably thought about the hairs on her arms without it. I'm seeing an only 4 stars coming.
— Jan 11, 2016 01:08PM
Zaz
is 4% done
Strong start, good writing, appealing characters, magic, mystery, humor and jungle (yes, all in only 2 chapters). I think I'll enjoy this immensely :D
— Jan 08, 2016 05:04AM
