ash ☆.。.:*・゚☆’s Reviews > The Predator > Status Update
ash ☆.。.:*・゚☆
is 19% done
This is the kind of book that would benefit from having a dual POV because I'm sorry, but this third person narrator is not it. It focuses exclusively on Morana so far and it's just huge paragraphs describing things I don't care about because it feels too repetitive and/or useless. Plus, the book is sloth paced, so slow that all I find myself thinking about while reading is whether to quit it or not
— May 19, 2024 06:02PM
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ash ☆.。.:*・゚☆
is 14% done
I'm liking this so far, but not gonna lie, I've been trying to skip the descriptions and just reading the dialogue but these descriptions are so long yet necessary that without reading them, you miss a lot of what's happening so when you get to the dialogue you're a bit confused... I don't like that
— Feb 12, 2024 04:24AM

