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The excessive amount of ‘x said’ is what happens when you don’t trust that your characters have their own voice.
May 26, 2024 04:10AM
Lay Your Sleeping Head (Henry Rios #1)

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Thank you, Nicole, for pointing out it was the 80's, it slipped my mind to search for a timeline. I'm not to the point of recommending this yet, but I was sad to not be able to enjoy such an effort of rewriting a story that seems so engaging so far.
May 27, 2024 02:48AM
Lay Your Sleeping Head (Henry Rios #1)


Camila T 🍉
Camila T 🍉 is 6% done
Who’s the pretty princess who got the same book twice? ❤️ going back and forth between the editions, this is noticeably better than the first.
May 25, 2024 05:23PM
Lay Your Sleeping Head (Henry Rios #1)


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