Carolee Wheeler’s Reviews > At First Spite > Status Update

This has been rough going at the beginning, in part because of awkward phrasing. Straight into the 2nd chapter, there are references to the present & past in the same sentence, which grammatically wouldn’t be a problem, but they’re supposed to clue the reader in to eight months of plot that hasn’t yet been explained. “She would have, but she wasn’t, but he was, because this other guy had done a thing…”