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I think one of my biggest issue is I hate flipping between the flashbacks and present day… it’s not building any suspense for me at all. It would make so much more sense to flashback to the entire night of events the first time she sees Shane after a decade, but leave whatever is the plot twist unsaid…
May 30, 2024 12:47PM
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All I have to say is go pound some fucking sand Brooke, you bitch.
May 27, 2024 09:38AM
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