Starlight’s Reviews > Taking The Human > Status Update

This is textbook what NOT TO DO when writing.
^literally the only thing I can say that’s not completely negative or desparaging.

I’m mad that I consumed this book in any capacity. I hate that I know this exists now.

There’s a really bad smell and this book is it.

Hopefully I’ll read some honest reviews now to feel better and justified that I wasn’t the only one who had to suffer through this shitty mess

I hate absolutely everything about this shit.
- ugly af photo cover
- shit shit shit shit writing/story/characters/dialogue/etc.

Just the fact that someone came up with this, and gave it to at least one person to read/edit/PUBLISH. Who gave this the okay??????????

^ the author being a man doesn’t really negate or excuse the fact that the writing and story was so fucking horrendous.

How the fuck is this person advertising and claiming themselves to be a bdsm/erotic author????!???

It’s giving; community college skinny frat boy, submissive and a total brat, idk, closeted homosexual??, with the barest aspirations to become a writer after getting a writing prompt..

…. This really has been the worst book I’ve read in a while.

Utter utter shit.

And it wasn’t until the last page on the authors end note, that I realized the author is a man.

Which kind of explains why this was so shit..but I’ve read plenty of shit from female authors too

…. This shit would’ve made so much more sense if it was a horror story.

A hundred pages have never seemed so long

Ugh
way to ruin two of my favorite genres

Bdsm and aliens.

This is the worst fucking book I’ve read in a while.. I said that at least twice in the last two days for some shit books I unfortunately read, but this one takes the cake.

Shit writing, SHIT STORY, shit characters, SHIT dialogue .

Barely a hundred pages
Surprising but whatever
Or so I thought

Now I’m struggling to read this shit

fucking boring as hell
Telling myself, at least it’s not long, doesn’t help.

Ugh