Jen’s Reviews > The Umbra King > Status Update
Jen
is 32% done
It’s loosing me. So far the story isn’t living up to the synopsis. The MMC isn’t morally grey. He’s just sad. Everyone in this prison the equivalent of heaven is good. The FMC is making out great. She has bill-free accommodations in a palace, a seamstress, a paying job, and freedom. I’m dont understand the punishment. A lot of empty threats from the MMC. Its pointless. The book isn’t giving Dark fantasy
— Jun 03, 2024 11:36AM
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Jen
is 74% done
Ohhhhhh It’s pretty bad. I want to quit but there is only 25% left…
— Jun 04, 2024 04:37PM

