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is 76% done
+3 for compelling mystery
+1 for characters who feel real
+1 for writing style (easy to read without being juvenile)
-1 for the characters sometimes making stupid decisions / being a bit stereotypical (so Threshold#2 is better)
-2 for sex scene I had to skip about 3/4 of the way in and lots of sexual references (including a frequently topless college student)
— Jun 04, 2024 04:15PM
+1 for characters who feel real
+1 for writing style (easy to read without being juvenile)
-1 for the characters sometimes making stupid decisions / being a bit stereotypical (so Threshold#2 is better)
-2 for sex scene I had to skip about 3/4 of the way in and lots of sexual references (including a frequently topless college student)
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