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"“Oh, kleines Mädchen , die Sie nicht möchten, dass diese ein.” Oh, little girl, you don’t want this one."
Um, no, that's not what that means, that's not even a german sentence.
If you do include german - or any other foreign language for that matter - in your english novels, it's best not to make it so obvious you used google translate.
Jan 18, 2016 01:38PM
Ruin You Completely (Sloan Brothers, #3)

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Tobias calmly repeated his words. “I want you to be my enkelin’s piano instructor.”
I hate it when authors use a random word from a foreign language in an english sentence where it makes NO sense whatsoever to use that specific word, just because they want to stress that they informed themselves about the foreign language their characters supposedly speak. DON'T DO THAT, IT SOUNDS RIDICULOUS AF
Jan 18, 2016 01:29PM
Ruin You Completely (Sloan Brothers, #3)


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