SamJ ★Needs a HEA★’s Reviews > Falling Completely > Status Update

Not that long since I read this, but ah feck it, I am re reading it.

Am loving this so far! It is very funny, love both the hero and the heroine. A few small niggles editing wise with the tiny odd missed word or wrong word used, but only very very minor. The secondary characters are fun and loveable too, am loving Caleb's aunt. Only 22% and have made at least 15 notes on my kindle of brilliant bits.

"Also, the balloons we were giving out were sort of the cause f the accident. So....yep. No probs dude"

NO. PROBS. DUDE?! Oh my God. What is wrong with you, you moron?

"You do realise Ben and Jerry are not actually your friends, right? Also did you finish the entire carton by yourself yesterday?"
"Hey!" I protested "I have been a loyal customer for decades. I even gave my input on the new flavours they brought out. Trust me. We're besties. And the information on the side of the carton said 'recommended serving sizes' not 'mandatory serving sizes'.

" She clapped an jumped up and down before she started dancing our happy dance we had created together when we were children.

It was a mixture of the Monster Mash and the Macarena and we rocked it every time. Needless to say, we were extremely popular as teenagers"

Ha! I so need to make my own happy dance.