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Oh, how handy, suddenly will has <spoiler>the power of telekinesis</spoiler>! What luck!
— Jan 20, 2016 05:45AM
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It's important for Will to wear these ear muffs in the MRI, because those powerful radio waves get really loud!
...Wait a minute...
— Jan 20, 2016 05:44AM
...Wait a minute...
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Instance of bad writing: genetics teacher confronts Will about not being interested in science. Will says maybe it's a recessive gene and he'll grow into it later. Genetics teacher is ebullient that Will "knows something about our subject." Because that's TOTALLY how genetics works.
— Jan 14, 2016 05:21AM
