C A’s Reviews > Not in Love > Status Update

Uhhh... This is going to sound REALLY nitpicky, but why third person omniscient for the MMC's chapters but first person for the FMC's chapters? It's weird and off-putting. Most of the Dual POV CRs out there use a consistent POV style and just work on differentiating chapters by voice.

It feels utterly bizarre to be inside the FMC's head but just "hearing" the MMC's thoughts from an external viewpoint. Not a fan.