Mel C’s Reviews > The Book of Strange New Things > Status Update
Mel C
is on page 116 of 592
This is shit. Is this a good author? Maybe I just don't like this style. No, this is just shit writing. 10 pages in: "Her breasts shook with the force of her heartbeat." Give me a break. I've never seen a breast move from a heartbeat. Nothing rings true. No dialogue, no descriptions, nothing. What a crock of shit.
— Jan 22, 2016 09:12PM
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