Lillian Francis’s Reviews > The Elf and Shoemaker > Status Update
Lillian Francis
is 30% done
Okay, that sex scene was overly long and kinda creepy since the MCs have never really met and one thought it was a dream.
— Jan 23, 2016 05:01AM
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Lillian Francis
is 35% done
Huge world building info dump immediately following the mega long skim inducing sex scene. Please get better. Please get better. Please...
— Jan 23, 2016 05:33AM
