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‘We had stories spread about Paolo and Connor.’ But the chapter is from Paolo’s POV! Why is he referring to himself in third person? And even if it was from the only other POV in the novel, Connor’s, that sentence still wouldn’t make a lick of sense.
— Jun 18, 2024 07:56PM
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This has not been proofread, has it? Most egregious is that I’ve seen the baby’s name spelled correctly only once in 61 pages! :(
— Jun 18, 2024 05:22PM
