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Alex Coleridge
is 68% done
As of yesterday. Sometimes annoyingly repetitive. Even spotted the exact same phrase used twice! But actually quite good. Just not really moving in much direction
— Jun 11, 2024 04:34PM
Alex Coleridge
is 54% done
Sometimes difficult to read with having to look up words so often, but when it's good I don't really mind.
I have been a little disappointed with how little David's wife and especially son have participated in the narrative, but maybe it's not their book.
— Jun 08, 2024 03:24PM
I have been a little disappointed with how little David's wife and especially son have participated in the narrative, but maybe it's not their book.
Alex Coleridge
is 53% done
Not bad, some really well written stuff like the last chapter before part 3. But I don't know. I still like it a lot.
— Jun 07, 2024 03:38PM
Alex Coleridge
is 38% done
I worry that Roland is basically a self-insert. But in this last chapter David seems to be coming into his own a little! More please! Also it is possibly a little repetitive?
— Jun 06, 2024 03:22PM
Alex Coleridge
is 19% done
Still love it. Really looking forward to the next part. Loved chapter XII. Or was it XI.
— Jun 03, 2024 02:25PM
Alex Coleridge
is 11% done
As of yesterday. Quickly on the way to becoming my favourite book. Roland is different to who I expected, though.
— Jun 02, 2024 04:02PM

