M. Jones’s Reviews > This Is How You Lose the Time War > Status Update
M. Jones
is 19% done
Stalled. Good start, but the epistolary format was wearing a little thin. The indirect nature of both the conflict and the protagonists' contact was tantalising, but also frustrating; perhaps seeing the characters interacting with their own sides would help. The writing is often exquisite, but can oversteps the fine line into 'Proux-level purpleness', where the cleverness brings you to a halt in wonder.
— Jun 30, 2024 12:41AM
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