jegaevi’s Reviews > Casual Farming > Status Update

I love the concept, it is pretty much 'Stardew Valley but book', which is definitely my niche. However, the execution is lacking. It needs proofreading, the punctuation is off and sometimes the author accidentally writes "me" instead of "him". There is a lot of tell and not show too. I still have no idea what certain monsters look like or how the menu/inventory system appears. I hope it gets better.