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This girl has some reeaaaaaally weird priorities

Is it really that hard to yell 4 words when someone is mad? Is it really that hard to tell ‘he is my mate’? Instead of saying that, exactly that and stopping ALL confusion, she’s saying ‘you don’t understand’. OMFG. It’s not like they have to keep it a secret anymore.

The way Tristan still references to her as variations of ‘pig girl’ is just grating.

This author rather write about the mundane school stuff and repetitive inner ramblings than actually write scenes where characters bond and conflict. How? How can someone butcher a series that has such great potential?

That whole scene in the gym with Rhi and Summer where they’re paired off and coach getting mad and sending them out is like one of the worst scenes in this book. It had me rolling my eyes so hard I had trouble reading the rest.

I geel like this author has trouble writing conflicts between characters. I’m not sure how many situations she has simply avoided but fizzling out tension instead of writing anything of interest.

Literally EVERY FUCKING CHAPTER had rising tension and missed fucking opportunity. I’m feeling like the Wolf now, raging in a cage wanting to scream and throttle the author. What the everloving fuck?!?

Literally every chance the author gets to raise tension and make the story interesting, has it deflating like a fucking balloon. Why the fuck would you write like that?