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Every once in a while phrases will just be copy-pasted and it drives me crazy. For example,
Chapter 43
“But this wasn’t something she could ignore or pretend away.”
And then a few pages later in chapter 44
“But this marriage wasn’t something she could ignore or pretend away.”
Talking about the same thing in the same context. Not the only time it happens maybe no one else cares but I find it grating.
— Jul 08, 2024 11:30AM
Chapter 43
“But this wasn’t something she could ignore or pretend away.”
And then a few pages later in chapter 44
“But this marriage wasn’t something she could ignore or pretend away.”
Talking about the same thing in the same context. Not the only time it happens maybe no one else cares but I find it grating.
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“He didn’t kiss her as if he’d simply just come back to life. He kissed her as if he’d died, been buried, and clawed his way out of the grave and through the dirt just to get to her.”
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
— Jul 07, 2024 07:58PM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
