Kelvin’s Reviews > The Will of the Many > Status Update

*whew* the pacing of this book is molasses. Vis is a robot. This dude has 0 emotional depth and the clinical writing does not help. Even tense action sequences this dude’s pulse doesn’t jump above 65 beats per second.

Hmmm... this got MEGA YA real quick. Not necessarily a bad thing, but considering the first 30% was like an adult spy thriller set in Fantasy inspired Rome but then in Part II the narrative switches to some generic magic school narrative takes some adjusting. I guess the plus in that is that Vis is behaving like a typical 17-year-old and not a 40-year-old scholar/spy.