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This book is becoming boring pretty fast. A lot of inner dialogue that’s unnecessary to the story. Repetition because of a change in pov while we wouldnt miss out if that repetition was skipped and: “i didn’t care about the layout, […] Not what his home said about him. At least he had more personality here. Dark, warm tones …” you JUST SAID the fmc didn’t care, why would you describe it?!
— Jul 11, 2024 02:56PM
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