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This book is becoming boring pretty fast. A lot of inner dialogue that’s unnecessary to the story. Repetition because of a change in pov while we wouldnt miss out if that repetition was skipped and: “i didn’t care about the layout, […] Not what his home said about him. At least he had more personality here. Dark, warm tones …” you JUST SAID the fmc didn’t care, why would you describe it?!
Jul 11, 2024 02:56PM
Addict (Bastard Brothers of Carnage #1)

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