Michelle’s Reviews > The Keyhole House > Status Update
Michelle
is 26% done
Obviously no editors caught the inconsistency with last names of a MAIN character ....
— Feb 09, 2016 10:50AM
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Michelle
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Not very well written. A quick read but only because a lot of things are glossed over and not detailed at all. Also the editing was very sloppy, pretty sure the boys last name changes to match the family that moves in which was clearly an oversight. Wasn't expecting big things from this story but with better writing the story could've been great.
— Feb 09, 2016 05:33PM

