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KC
is 2% done
Please! Somebody!! Edit this book!
An entire conversation, several different back and forth statements from two different characters, and the whole thing is one big run on sentence. There are no new paragraphs when a new person starts speaking. We have quotation marks butted up against each other. I'm having a very difficult time enjoying this story because it's so poorly put together
— Jul 15, 2024 11:02PM
An entire conversation, several different back and forth statements from two different characters, and the whole thing is one big run on sentence. There are no new paragraphs when a new person starts speaking. We have quotation marks butted up against each other. I'm having a very difficult time enjoying this story because it's so poorly put together
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KC
is 27% done
The editing and formatting has improved. I don't know what happened at the beginning of the book, but it's definitely better now. They're still random page breaks in places I don't understand, but it's not as terrible as it was in the first 5%
— Jul 16, 2024 03:07PM
