Petra ’s Reviews > Breaking Through the Pain > Status Update
Petra
is 40% done
This is something that happens in books following a group of friends finding love. There is quite a bit of focus on the side characters... and I am not sure I like it. There are scenes with the MCs but I would love to have more.
Also - you are what... 25? You kiss a guy and cannot stop thinking about a small kiss? Also. There is so much talk about a PTSD and trauma but nothing on page. Hm... Guess I am just bitchy.
— Jul 16, 2024 12:50PM
Also - you are what... 25? You kiss a guy and cannot stop thinking about a small kiss? Also. There is so much talk about a PTSD and trauma but nothing on page. Hm... Guess I am just bitchy.
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Petra
is 56% done
So yeah... I am done. Not feeling the smut. Lots of communication is off-page.
— Jul 17, 2024 12:10AM
Petra
is 40% done
I also feel like this is a story full of meddlers. Parents, siblings, friends, a therapist. All just giving advice and "making sure you're okay" but it does not feel to me as friendly but as invasive. Dunno.
— Jul 16, 2024 12:52PM
