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Good lord! The main character (not Chan) is so bloody thick you could use him for paving. And really? A tell-tale cigarette butt? I didn't think they still went in for those at this stage of writing.
— Oct 14, 2011 04:41PM
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"Hawaii's a little too much like Heaven to be altogether safe." God DAMN I love this stuff.
— Oct 13, 2011 07:53PM
