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DNF for now. I decided to put this aside. Maybe I'll give it another try some other day. But as of now, the loads of head-hopping did me in.
— Feb 10, 2016 12:28PM
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I just started this story and I'm already thinking of putting it aside to read something else. There's load of head hopping happening and I'm only 23 pages into the book. I struggle to figure out which character is thinking or feeling because the pov changes are occurring sometimes every paragraph. Ugh!
— Jan 31, 2016 07:09PM
