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Staci
is 56% done
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ spicy mm scene well written and gave all the 🌶️ feels if you are into that type of kink.
Repeating of similar phrasing is a little sloppy feeling rather than story binding especially when starting new chapters resetting a scene we are already aware of.
— Jul 18, 2024 12:24AM
Repeating of similar phrasing is a little sloppy feeling rather than story binding especially when starting new chapters resetting a scene we are already aware of.
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Staci
is 74% done
The story is gripping and keeping me reading. However the change of language between animal and human when describing the characters is confusing. Are they human? Are the wolves? Are they a hybrid of the two?
— Jul 18, 2024 08:15AM
