Rachel’s Reviews > Pretty Girls > Status Update

I’m not sure if i’m going to like this or not, the writing already just isn’t my style. It’s weirdly repetitive and just kind of silly. For example: “She was going home - back to their home, the home they shared together”. Idk why but this made me laugh like yeeeah i got it, it just felt so strangely worded and a lot of things like that so far is just taking me out of the story idk 🤷‍♀️