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Metessa
is 10% done
So far choppy and unrealistic. Unrealistic in scenario and character action. By choppy, I mean the storyline is popping right along from one scene to the next like it's in fast forward. I feel detached from the world and the characters at this point but it's still early.
— Feb 12, 2016 03:02PM
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Metessa
is 81% done
"My gifts totaled out to about $1,000 in cash value, but I expected the second year to be even better, which it was, by 300 percent." High school student with an after school job washing dishes earns $300,000 prostituting in her spare time?? Maybe if she blackmailed her clients! And the author just distracted me from the read as my imagination came to a screeching halt to call bullshit!
— Feb 25, 2016 11:40AM
