Evora Blake’s Reviews > Warrior > Status Update
Evora Blake
is 28% done
Needs some serious editing. Feels like an early draft. Seems so far like a good base for a story but would need a lot more work. It feels like its falling into generic nearly bad romance novel status. Some reactions aren't supported enough and feel random, flipflopping from fear to joy.
— Feb 13, 2016 09:36AM
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