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That exchange with the king could probably have seemed more complex or intelligent somehow, but it still retains the author's unique voice I think. Fun story!
— Feb 14, 2016 11:10PM
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It does seem like the story has started to rush. Not enough time spent realizing well this fire/tower/attack scene. But I'm not giving up yet!
— Feb 15, 2016 11:02PM