Ashley’s Reviews > Broken: the June trilogy > Status Update
Ashley
is 25% done
Throwing in the towel and DNF'ing. This is in severe need of an editor, the errors are too distracting. 🥲 one character was introduced as Robbie, the next sentence he's "Bobby", the next sentence is "Bobbie". Another instance, June doesn't tell anyone who she is, she's found without ID, yet the nurse AND Dalton both know her full name. It doesn't make any sense at all.
— Jul 26, 2024 12:05PM
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