Madeline’s Reviews > Of Jade and Dragons > Status Update
Madeline
is on page 212 of 470
Ughhh... Should I even finish this? I'm honestly only still reading because I want another 400+ page book under my belt. But this might be too much effort and too little reward. So far, I agree with all of Lauren's review. There's just SO MUCH TELLING. Everything is so flat. I can't even remember certain things from one page to the next. This really sounds like the 1st draft of someone who JUST discovered writing.
— Jul 29, 2024 09:32PM
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Madeline
is on page 100 of 470
OK, I'm sticking it out a little bit longer - things are a little more interesting now that we've reached the Guild and the apprenticeship trials. 👏⚙️🏆 Still very tell, don't show. Also, I just realized her name is Ying and the hot prince's is Ye-Yang, so...I think we all know where this is going. 😏☯️💘
— Jul 29, 2024 06:16AM
