Youssef’s Reviews > Antimage > Status Update
Youssef
is 54% done
This world has basically robots and Lazer beams through magic, and yet this is a whole chapter about MC deciding on how to introduce.. Gunpowder?! He's some kind of biotech scientist, so he'd be making muskets at the very best, and yet the author is approaching it like some world shattering secret knowledge.. dude you just wrote in several individuals with WMD level powers. Ugh!
— Aug 03, 2024 02:41PM
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Youssef
is 30% done
Introducing a whole new party a third in is a mistake. I feel like I wasted my time with the first party, and introducing a whole crop of new characters is confusing. I don't really want to know these kids when I have been invested in a perfectly good groupe of adult characters until now and they just disappear.
— Aug 03, 2024 12:11PM
