Status Update

Rin is 17% done

The beginning is quite harsh… I reckon I'm not used to that language register, but, moreover, I'm quickly tired of the protagonist telling every other paragraph how everyone is gazing at her, is lusting at her, etc. Ok, every man wants her, for a reason or another, maybe there's enough vocabulary or figure of speech to give some variations in the writing?

— Aug 04, 2024 06:33AM