Kelly (Maybedog)’s Reviews > Cryptshiver > Status Update
Kelly (Maybedog)
is 60% done
This is a terrible mystery. There isn't enough information to even understand what's happening let alone figure it out yourself. New information comes to light after the MC has figured something out. And none of it logically flows. Again, it's all over the place. The characters are inconsistent despite the triteness of the werewolf bad boy with his leather jacket and motorcycle and the vamp with his big mansion.
— Feb 24, 2016 09:02AM
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Kelly (Maybedog)
is 65% done
Oh, OK, I missed it, they did mention the bad guy earlier. I was too hung up on the stupid names. Ender? Really? Does anyone hear that name without thinking of the Ender of Ender's Game? And then the captain is Marx. Ugh.
— Feb 24, 2016 09:20AM
Kelly (Maybedog)
is 65% done
I feel like I should know who these people are like it's a sequel. They are talking about the bad guy like they've known him for years.
The sexist comments are really repulsive, too. Yes, let's compare a woman's rage at a violent killing machine targeting her city with PMS.
— Feb 24, 2016 09:04AM
The sexist comments are really repulsive, too. Yes, let's compare a woman's rage at a violent killing machine targeting her city with PMS.
Kelly (Maybedog)
is 22% done
Wow, nary a trite trope left unused. Graceful cold vampire? Check. Wild sex starved werewolf? Check. Tidy and messy desks respectively? Check. Grizzled old cemetery caretaker? Check. Who says "ain't" and "lady friend" and has poor eyesight? Check. The police all hate and fear the elite paranormal detectives? Check. and on it goes. Plus, they are in their own heads way too much and tell us how they feel ad nauseum.
— Feb 24, 2016 08:25AM
