Vanessa’s Reviews > You May Now Kill the Bride > Status Update

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Interesting but moves around a lot. It seems to lose the main story at points. For example, the original murder victim. The chapter with the vaginal eggs was strange and unnecessary. We also haven’t heard from the detectives about the crime. It’s a major part of the story it should be kept in more. I also would’ve like to hear chapters from more than one perspective: other friends, detectives, etc.